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The following changes were made:
1. Removed text: "the science facts about"
I won't go into it here but I try to avoid using 'science' except in certain circumstances.
2. Added text: "updated Dec 24th, 2014"
Makes it clear it's not the original and adds a date to give people a point of reference.
3. Changed the portrait of Andrew Wakefield
As much as I like the original infographic I really didn't like most of the images and this one I could do something about.
4. Added text: "a study of 12 children"
Helps to put the later numbers in context.
5. Changed the image of the study
Initially changed to make room for the additional text but also changed it so it's clear the the "link" was dubious.
6. Changed text from "Lancet published a paper by Dr. Andrew Wakefield, a dramatic study that found a connection between autism and vaccines" to "Lancet published a paper by Dr. Andrew Wakefield, a study which made dramatic claims of a connection between autism and vaccines."
Being cautious about the way the information is portrayed to ensure it doesn't accidentally leave people with the idea that there was a link.
7. Changed text from "2005 A review of 31 studies covering more than 10,000,000 children also found no connection" to "2005 A review of 6 studies covering more than 1,100,000 children also found no connection"
This refers to the 2005 Cochrane review 'Vaccines for measles, mumps and rubella in children', numbers were corrected to reflect the part of the review concerned with autism.
Honestly I still think it's a bit dodgy including it at all instead of just the updated version but then it messes up the layout a bit too much: http://i.imgur.com/uCsXHqB.png
8. Changed text from "2012 A review of 27 cohort studies, 17 case control studies, 6 self-controlled case series studies, 5 time series trials, 2 ecological studies, 1 case cross-over trial covering over 14,700,000 children" to "2012 A review of 3 cohort studies, 3 case control studies, 1 self-controlled case series studies, 2 time series trials and 1 case-only study covering over 1,150,000 children"
Refers to the 2012 Cochrane review 'Vaccines for measles, mumps and rubella in children' which is an update to the 2005 review. Numbers were corrected to reflect the part of the review concerned with autism.
9. Changed text from "Recently an anti-vaccine..." to "In 2013 an anti-vaccine..."
Adding a specific year will help the infographic age better.
10. Changed text from "Although declared eradicated in 2000..." to "Although eliminated in the USA in 2000..."
This was downright misleading, especially in the context of the cases in the UK & France.
Eradicated means the disease has been wiped out whereas eliminated from a region means that the disease is no longer endemic to that region (i.e. it needs to be imported).
In 2000, measles was declared eliminated in the USA.
11. Changed text from "Before widespread vaccinations of babies" to "Before worldwide vaccinations of babies"
Just wanted to clarify that the figures are global.
12. Changed the pertussis cases image
The graph was bizarre to say the least with numbers given for only the 1960s, 1970s, 1980s, 2004 & 2012 which made it seem cherry picked.
The numbers also didn't seem to match up with the CDC figures (I think 1959 may have been added to the 1960s).
13. Changed text from "a new study concluded that vaccine refusals were largely to blame for a 2010 outbreak of whooping cough in California" to "A 2013 study conclude that vaccine refusals contributed to the 2010 outbreak of whooping cough in California."
Changing 'new' to '2013' helps the infographic age better.
The study states, "Our data suggest clustering of NMEs may have been 1 of several factors in the 2010 California pertussis resurgence." which is very different from saying non-medical exemptions are "largely to blame".





